On a beautiful late spring afternoon, twenty-five years ago, two young men graduated from the same college.
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This 1975 WSJ control ran for 28 years — the longest-running direct mail letter in history. The genius: two men with identical starts, one succeeds wildly. The reader's brain immediately asks 'why?' — and the answer is the offer.
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This 1975 WSJ control ran for 28 years — the longest-running direct mail letter in history. The genius: two men with identical starts, one succeeds wildly. The reader's brain immediately asks 'why?' — and the answer is the offer.
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Copy technique: The narrative open is warm, literary, and deliberately un-advertising-like. 'Beautiful late spring afternoon' creates a visual scene. 'Twenty-five years ago' signals a long-term perspective. 'Two young men' introduces the parallel-lives structure that will drive the entire letter. The reader doesn't know this is an ad until paragraph three — by then, they're hooked by the story. This open is taught in every direct response copywriting course because it proves that a story can outsell a headline in long-form formats.