hooks BioFit / Chrissie Miller
How A Broke 40-Year-Old Burned 47 Pounds In 11 Weeks — Without Changing What He Eats For Dinner
The headline buries the dream in the qualifier — 47 pounds in 11 weeks is the number, but ‘without changing what he eats for dinner’ is the mechanism. Most copywriters write the dream. Gary Halbert wrote the reason you can believe it.